Division Essay-First Draft

OUTLINE

Thesis: Children’s personal developing is affected by some influences: parents, television, peers and teachers.

1.0: Parents can guide their children’s life in a good way or in a bad way.

1.1: Everything is learnt by parents.

1.2: Parents are example for their children.

2.0: Children emulate what they see.

2.1: They will be interested in what they listen and watch in a day.

2.2: They want to live like them.

3.0: Children usually behave like their peers.

3.1: They think that acting like their friends is important.

3.2: They want to possess what other children have.

            4.0:  Teachers’ behaviors are model for their students.

                        3.1:  Teachers learn something them, so they are venerable for children.

                        3.2: Children achieve some features in classes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

                                        

              What Affects Children’s Personal Developing?

What people lived during their childhood is important for each people’s whole life.  Childhood is so fundamental that it determines what people do, say, like and how they feel. Because people’s personalities are determined in this term, knowing what they are affected should be known. Children’s personal developing is affected by some influences: parents, television, peers and teachers.

First influence is parents because children know them until they are born and admire. So, parents can guide their children’s life in a good way or in a bad way. Since education is started at home by parents, children learn everything how their parents want. Therefore, every children’s thought would be different each other in their future life. Because they are protected and thrived by their parents, they think that their parents are hero. So, they want to do, think, feel what their heroes do, think and feel. For example, they think that smoking can be a good thing if they smoke cigarette. If they say a bad expression, they can say the same expression.

Second influence is television because parents don’t lots of time with their children and let them watch television. So, they emulate people they watch on TV, how people response, what they say and how they behave. Programs, film, soap opera, songs or cartoons are lead to their interest and they can want to watch them in their future. If a child watch lots of films that include bad expressions, kidnappings, smugglers, this child can be think that these are not so bad things. So, they can also want to live what they see and hear.

Another influence is peers because children don’t want to be different from others. They don’t like the other children who are don’t behave and make sentences like them. Therefore, a child must be started to behave, make sentences like others and all children do when a child start to do something. Children want to possess whatever the other children have and important thing is other children have to buy them, not their wanting. Their goals can be same their peers. If a child want to buy a toy car, the possibility of the others wanting buy a toy car ids high. So, they can want to purchase a real car.

Fourth influence is teachers because teachers teach something. So, they are venerable and their behaviors are right for children. Teachers are not only model for them but also leader. Children sometimes see their teachers most often than their mothers and fathers and usually tell their secrets. Therefore, their behaviors towards them teach something about life. Moreover, children can’t achieve some features if they can’t achieve in class. These features some of which are self-confidence and explaining themselves would be important for their job or task and lack of these features can be lead some problems.

To sum up, children so delicate that they can be affected by trivial things and these things can change their lives. People’s characters are determined in childhood term and it is determined by lot of influences. Therefore, people are different each other.

Big City Life and Small Town Life_Comparison contrast_Second Draft

                                                                 

                  Big City Life and Small Town Life

 

                            OUTLINE

Thesis: It can be said these differences between big city life and small city life in terms of running into familiar people, meeting people who are different from each other, migration and food.

 

1: In small towns it is more likely to run into familiar people than in big cities.

 

    A: Small towns

 

         1: Everyone knows each other.

 

         2: They keep a good look out for everyone who lives there.

 

    B: Big cities

 

         1: Anyone doesn’t know even people who live in their apartment building.

 

         2: The other people’s problems don’t interest them.

 

2: In big cities it more likely to meet people who are different from each other.

 

   A: Small towns

 

        1: They have same culture because they believe similar thing.

 

        2: They have similar life style.

 

   B: Big cities

 

         1: They have different culture from each other.

 

         2: They have different life style.

 

3: There is a migration to big cities from small towns.

 

      A: Small towns

 

         1: Finding a job is hard.

 

         2: It’s easier to reach somewhere and there isn’t any problem about building.

 

      B: Big Cities

 

          1: Big cities have got large job pool.

 

           2: There are traffic problems and urban sprawl.

 

4: In smalls town foods are almost always better than in big cities.

 

      A: Small towns

 

       1: Smaller towns usually tend to have the same thing, but they are good food.

       2: Foods are healthy.

 

     B: Big cities

 

       1: There is a wide of variety of foods

        2: They aren’t healthy.

 

 

 

                                   Big City Life and Small Town Life

 

            It’s thought that the important thing is not where a person lives and the most essential thing to be happy is that a person lives with whom. Children’s characters are affected by their surroundings not by a city, town or village. However, it’s clear that people’s life and their characters change according to where they live. So, big city life and small town life affect people’s life and their differences make differences in people’s life. It can be said these differences between big city life and small town life in terms of running into familiar people, meeting people who are different from each other, migration and food.

 

            The first difference between small town life and big city life is that in small town it is more likely to run into familiar people than in big city. Everyone knows each other in small town. Even when a person has a car accident; the possibility of being familiar to other driver is high. But, in big cities anyone doesn’t know each other and they don’t need to it. They even don’t know the people who they live in their apartment building. In small town, people either know each other very well or they are relative, so they keep a good look out for everyone who lives there. The person who lives in the same town is right for them whatever they do.  However people don’t know lots of⁵ people and a person’s problems don’t interest the other people in big cities.

 

            The second difference between small town life and big city life is that in big cities is that it more likely to meet people who are different from each other. They have same culture because they believe similar thing. Moreover, they are relative or familiar with each other and their ancestors can be same people, so their culture is same or similar. In big cities people, on the other hand, have different culture from each other. Having different ancestor, not knowing each other and coming from different place are some of reasons why people have different culture. In small town people have similar life style because they have no so much to do. Nearly all people do the same thing during a day and it is normal for them. People, in contrast, have different life style in big cities. Every person has different job, task, culture and belief, so their life is affected by them and their life style is changing.

 

            Another difference between small town life and big city life is that in big cities is that the numbers of people who immigrate. People generally immigrate to big cities from small town. Therefore, finding a job is nearly impossible in small town and business offices which have been opened for years are closed. Nevertheless, big cities have got large job pool and lots of business offices are opened. So, in big cities finding a suitable job for everyone and develop themselves one job they want is easier than in small town. In small town, there aren’t so many vehicles and roads so; it’s easier to reach somewhere. There aren’t traffic problems and wasting of time during the headway. Problems about buildings aren’t seen, for there aren’t so many buildings. However; there are lots of people, vehicle, roads, and traffic lights so there are traffic problems. In big cities lots of buildings are raised day by day and urban sprawl occurs.

 

            The fourth difference between small town life and big city life is that in big cities is food. Although small towns usually tend to have the same thing because they grow their food in the same region; these foods are good, for they are grown in natural way. In big cities foods, on the contrary, have a wide variety because of import and drugs which help foods to grow immediately in every circumstance. Foods which are grown in small city are healthy because they are grown in places where are suitable for them and in natural way, not with drugs. Generally fast foods and foods which are made by machines aren’t eaten in there. However, in big cities foods are grown by using lots of different techniques and drugs. So, these foods are not only bad but also not healthy.

 

            Differences of places, which people, live affect people’s life styles and characters. Although some people can think that living in a big city is better than living in a small town; some people don’t want to live in big cities and prefer to live in small town. To me, the more a city is big, the more it has got problems.

Comparison and Contrast Essay 2 - Big City Life and Small Town Life

                  Big City Life and Small Town Life

                           OUTLINE

Thesis: It can be said these differences between big city life and small city life in terms of running into familiar people, meeting people who are different from each other, migration and food.

1: In small towns it is more likely to run into familiar people than in big cities.

    A: Small towns

         1: Everyone knows each other.

         2: They keep a good look out for everyone who lives there.

    B: Big cities

         1: Anyone doesn’t know even people who live in their apartment building.

         2: The other people’s problems don’t interest them.

2: In big cities it more likely to meet people who are different from each other.

   A: Small towns

        1: They have same culture because they believe similar thing.

        2: They have similar life style.

   B: Big cities

         1: They have different culture from each other.

         2: They have different life style.

3: There is a migration to big cities from small towns.

      A: Small towns

         1: Finding a job is hard.

         2: It’s easier to reach somewhere and there isn’t any problem about building.

      B: Big Cities

          1: Big cities have got large job pool.

           2: There are traffic problems and urban sprawl.

4: In smalls town foods are almost always better than in big cities.

      A: Small towns

       1: Smaller towns usually tend to have the same thing, but they are good food.

       2: Foods are healthy.

     B: Big cities

       1: There is a wide of variety of foods.

       2: They aren’t healthy.

 

                                   Big City Life and Small Town Life

            It’s thought that the important thing is not where a person lives and the most essential thing to be happy is that a person lives with whom. Children’s characters are affected by their surroundings not by a city, town or village. However, it’s clear that people’s life and their characters change according to where they live. So, big city life and small town life affect people’s life and their differences make differences in people’s life. It can be said these differences between big city life and small town life in terms of running into familiar people, meeting people who are different from each other, migration and food.

            The first difference between small town life and big city life is that in small town it is more likely to run into familiar people than in big city. Everyone knows each other in small town. Even when a person has a car accident, the possibility of the other driver is familiar is high. But, in big cities anyone doesn’t know each other and they don’t need to it. They even don’t know the people who they live in their apartment building. In small town, people either know each other very well or they are relative, so they keep a good look out for everyone who lives there. The person who lives in the same town is right for them whatever they do.  However, people don’t know lots of people and a person’s problems don’t interest the other people in big cities.

            The second between small town life and big city life is that in big cities is that it more likely to meet people who are different from each other. They have same culture because they believe similar thing. Moreover, they are relative or familiar with each other and their ancestors can be same people, so their culture is same or similar. In big cities people, on the other hand, have different culture from each other. Having different ancestor and not knowing each other coming from different place are some of reason why people different culture. In small town people have similar life style because they have no so much to do. Nearly all people do the same thing during a day and it is normal for them. People, in contrast, have different life style in big cities. Every person has different job, task, culture and belief, so their life is affected by them and their life style is change different.

            Another difference between small town life and big city life is that in big cities is that the numbers of people who are immigrate. People generally immigrate to big cities from small town. Therefore, finding a job is nearly impossible in small town and business offices which have been opened for years are closed. Nevertheless, big cities have got large job pool and lots of business offices are opened. So, in big cities finding a suitable job for everyone and develop themselves one job they want is easier than in small town. In small town, there aren’t so many vehicles and roads so; it’s easier to reach somewhere. There aren’t traffic problems and wasting of time during the headway. Problems about buildings aren’t seen, for there aren’t so many buildings. However; there are lots of people, vehicle, roads, and traffic lights so there are traffic problems. In big cities lots of buildings are raised day by day and urban sprawl occurs.

            The fourth difference between small town life and big city life is that in big cities is food. Although small towns usually tend to have the same thing because they grow their food in the same region, these foods are good, for they are grown in natural way. In big cities foods, on the contrary, have a wide variety because of import and drugs which are help foods to grow immediately in every circumstance. Foods which are grown in small city are healthy because they are grown in places where are suitable for them and in natural way, not with drugs. Generally fast foods and foods which are made by machines aren’t eaten in there. However, in big cities foods are grown by using lots of different techniques and drugs. So, these foods are not only bad but also not healthy.

            Differences of places, which people, live affect people’s life styles and characters. Although some people can think that living in a big city is better than living in a small town, some people don’t want to live in big cities and prefer to live in small town. To me, the more a city is big, the more it has got problems.

SINGLE LIFE AND MARRIED LIFE- (COMPARISON AND CONTRAST ESSAY ) - SECOND DRAFT

                                OUTLINE

THESIS: There are some differences between married life and single life.

1.       Single people are  more indepedent  than married people.

A.      Married people

1.       Married people must explain everyting about their life.

2.       Married people must think what time should  they go home.

B.      Single people

1.       Single people don’t have to explain everyting to anyone.

2.       Single people can go home when they  want.

  2.   Single people have more free time than married people.

          A.   Married people

              1.    They have more responsibilty, so they may not find free time.

      B.    Single people

            1.      Because they are only responsible for themselves, they can find free time.

3.  Married people are more careful in making decision.

           A.   Married people

                 1.  Married people  must think the other people in their family when they make a decision.

                2.  Married people  must be careful about how to spend time and money.

           B.   Single people

               1.  Thinking only themselves is enough for single people.

               2.  They  think only themselves when they decide how to spend their time and money.

 

                         SINGLE LIFE AND MARRIED LIFE

Marriage has lots of different meanings in every culture, and it seems good and traditional behavior in most of them. However, it nearly changes every part of a person’s life. When we look at a single person’s life and a married person’s life, we can find lots of differences like independence, freedom and making decision.

            One of differences between single people and married people is that single people are more independent than married people. Married people need to express what they do in a day to their wives or husbands. Married people can’t do whatever they want unless they think of their family and permit to them. However, the single people don’t have to say something about their life to anyone. If they want to do something, wanting is enough for them to make it. Married people must think of what time they should go home because their family can worry about them. Moreover, they must spare time for their family. But, single people don’t need to be careful about what time they go to home.

            The other difference is that single people have more free time than married people. Married people have more responsibilities than single people. They must be interested in their children problem like their homework, their private life etc. Single people; on the other hand, are responsible for only them. So, they can find much more free time for sports, reading something, shopping, going to somewhere etc. And thinking themselves is enough for them to go to somewhere or do something.

            The third difference is that married people should be more careful when they make a decision and decide how to spend their time or money. Their decisions affect not only them but also other family members; therefore, they must think of the other family members, not only themselves. When they say a word, it is thought that this word is said by all people in the family, not a person. For example, one member of the family owe somebody, this debt is everyone in the home, both him and her.  Single people’s decisions, in contrast, affect only them. They must be careful when they promise or make a decision, but it isn’t so important as married people’s decision because their decision’s results are put up with by lots of people. Married people must be careful when they decide how to spend their time because their time is important their children’s behaviors which determine their future. Not only their time but also their way of the spending money is important for their family life and future. However, thinking of only their future, behavior and feeling may be enough for single people. They don’t have children whose behavior can be bad if they don’t have time for their children. And they don’t have a family which can be on the hook if they spend lots of money needlessly.

            Marriage is important for everyone and it can be thought that starting a family is necessary by some culture or people. In every part of the world, marriage has an important role for a person and its results are also important. But chances are mandatory for making a new family.

SINGLE AND MARRIED LIFE (COMPARISON AND CONTRAST )

                                OUTLINE

THESIS: There are some differences between married life and single life.

1.       Single people are  more indepedent  than married people.

A.      Married people

1.       Married people must explain everyting about their life.

2.       Married people must think what time should  they go home.

B.      Single people

1.       Single people don’t have to explain everyting to anyone.

2.       Single people can go home when they  want.

  2.   Single people have more free time than married people.

          A.   Married people

              1.    They have more responsibilty, so they may not find free time.

      B.    Single people

            1.      Because they are only responsible for themselves, they can find free time.

3.  Married people are more careful in making decision.

           A.   Married people

                 1.  Married people  must think the other people in their family when they make a decision.

                2.  Married people  must be careful about how to spend time and money.

           B.   Single people

               1.  Thinking only themselves is enough for single people.

               2.  They  think only themselves when they decide how to spend their time and money.

 

 

                             

                                          SINGLE LIFE AND MARRIED LIFE

Marriage has  lots of different meanings  in every culture, and it seems a good and traditional behaviour  in most of them. Hovewer, it nearly change every part of a person’s life.When we look at a single person’s life and a married person’s life, we can find lots of differiences like independence, freedom and making decision.

                One of differiences between single people and married people is that single people are more independence than married people. Married people need to express what they do in a day to their wife or husband. Married people can’t do whatever they want unless they think their family and permit them. Hovewer, the single people don’t have to say something about their life to anyone. If they want to do something, wanting is enough. Married people must  think what time they should go home because their family can worry about them. Morever, they must have time for their family. But, single people don’t need to be careful about what time they go to home.

                The other differience is that single people have more free time than married people.Married people have more responsibility than single people. They must interested in their children problem like their homework, their  private life etc. Single people on the other hand are responsible for only themselves. So, they can find much more free time for sports, reading something, shopping, going to somewhere etc. And thinking themselves is enough for them to go to somewhere or do something.

                The third differience is that married people should be more careful when they make a decision and decide how to spend their time or money.Their decisions effect not only them but also other family members; therefore, they must think the other family members, not only themselves. When they say a word, it is thougt that this word is said by all people in the family, not a person.  Single people’s decisions ,in contrast, effect  only them. They must be careful when thay promise or make a decision, but it isn’t so important as married people’s decision because their decision’s results are put up with by lots of people. Married people must be careful when they decide how to spend their time because their time is important their childrens’ behaviours which determine their future. Not only their time but also their way of the spending money are important for their family life and future.However, thinking only their future, behaviour and feeling may enough for single people. They don’t have chidren whose behaviour can be bad if they don’t have time for them. And they don’t have a family which can be on the hook if they spend lots of money needlessly.

                Marriage is important for everyone and it can be tought that starting a family is necessary by some culture or people. In every part of the world marriage has a important role for a person and  its results are also important. But chances are mandotory for making a new family.