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THESIS: There are some differences between married life and
single life.
1.
Single people are more indepedent than married people.
A.
Married people
1.
Married people must explain everyting about their
life.
2.
Married people must think what time should they go home.
B.
Single people
1.
Single people don’t have to explain everyting to
anyone.
2.
Single people can go home when they want.
2. Single people have more free time than
married people.
A. Married people
1. They have more responsibilty, so they may
not find free time.
B. Single people
1. Because they are only responsible for
themselves, they can find free time.
3. Married people are
more careful in making decision.
A. Married people
1. Married people must think the other people in their family
when they make a decision.
2. Married people must be careful about how to spend time and money.
B. Single people
1. Thinking only themselves is enough for single
people.
2. They
think only themselves when they decide how to spend their time and money.
SINGLE LIFE AND MARRIED LIFE
Marriage has lots of different meanings in every culture, and it seems a good and
traditional behaviour in most of them.
Hovewer, it nearly change every part of a person’s life.When we look at a
single person’s life and a married person’s life, we can find lots of
differiences like independence, freedom and making decision.
One of
differiences between single people and married people is that single people are
more independence than married people. Married people need to express what they
do in a day to their wife or husband. Married people can’t do whatever they
want unless they think their family and permit them. Hovewer, the single people
don’t have to say something about their life to anyone. If they want to do
something, wanting is enough. Married people must think what time they should go home because
their family can worry about them. Morever, they must have time for their
family. But, single people don’t need to be careful about what time they go to
home.
The
other differience is that single people have more free time than married
people.Married people have more responsibility than single people. They must
interested in their children problem like their homework, their private life etc. Single people on the other
hand are responsible for only themselves. So, they can find much more free time
for sports, reading something, shopping, going to somewhere etc. And thinking
themselves is enough for them to go to somewhere or do something.
The
third differience is that married people should be more careful when they make
a decision and decide how to spend their time or money.Their decisions effect
not only them but also other family members; therefore, they must think the
other family members, not only themselves. When they say a word, it is thougt
that this word is said by all people in the family, not a person. Single people’s decisions ,in contrast,
effect only them. They must be careful
when thay promise or make a decision, but it isn’t so important as married
people’s decision because their decision’s results are put up with by lots of
people. Married people must be careful when they decide how to spend their time
because their time is important their childrens’ behaviours which determine
their future. Not only their time but also their way of the spending money are
important for their family life and future.However, thinking only their future,
behaviour and feeling may enough for single people. They don’t have chidren
whose behaviour can be bad if they don’t have time for them. And they don’t
have a family which can be on the hook if they spend lots of money needlessly.
Marriage
is important for everyone and it can be tought that starting a family is
necessary by some culture or people. In every part of the world marriage has a
important role for a person and its
results are also important. But chances are mandotory for making a new family.
** it seems a (del) good and traditional behaviour
YanıtlaSil** it nearly change (Sva)
** we can find lots of differiences (Sp)
** One of differiences between single people and married people (Ʌ) (Sp)
** Married people need to express what they do in a day to their wife or husband. (Sing-Plu)
** Married people can’t do whatever they want unless they think their family and permit them. (Ʌ) (?)
** The other differience is that (Sp)
** They must interested in their children problem like their homework, their private life etc. (Vte) (Ww) (Sing-Plu)
** Single people on the other hand are responsible for only themselves. (Wrong word order)
** And thinking themselves is enough for them to go to somewhere or do something. (R)
** it can be tought that (Sp)
** In every part of the world marriage has a important role (P) (wrong article)
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YanıtlaSilindepedent, everyting, hovewer, morever, thougt, thay, mandotory--->SP
YanıtlaSilchildrens’--->Singular-plural
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YanıtlaSil1 it seems a (del) good and traditional behaviour.
YanıtlaSil2 it nearly change(sva)
3 single people are more independence(pos) than married people
4 Married people need to express what they do in a day to (their wife or husband). (Sing-Plu)
5 Married people can’t do whatever they want unless they think (prep) their family and permit (prep) them.
6 wanting is enough (prep).
7 Married people must think (prep) what time
8 Morever, they must have time for their family.(you may write this sentence with different words)
9 Married people have more responsibility(pos) than single people
10 They must (Ʌ) interested in their...
11 Single people on the other hand are responsible for only themselves. (run on sentence)
12 And thinking themselves is enough for them to go to somewhere or do something.(?)
13 they must think (prep) the other family members,
14 When they say a word, it is thougt that this( word is said by all people)(check the meaning) in the family, not a person.
15 . Married people must be careful when they decide how to spend their time because their time is important their childrens’ behaviours which determine their future.(?)
16 .However, thinking (prep) only their future, behaviour and feeling may(Ʌ) enough for single people.
17 They don’t have chidren whose behaviour can be bad if they don’t have time for them.(?)
18 In every part of the world(Ʌ) marriage has a..
19 But chances are mandotory(sp) for making a new family.
20 also in some words, there are spelling mistakes