cause and effect essay 1-first draft

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Thesis: So, four main effect of moving to a new place or town are finding new fiends, getting used to a new place, effects on children and finding o job.

1.0: Try to find friends who think like a person who moved.

1.1: Being accepted by friends.

1.2: Getting used their surroundings.

2.0: A person who moved should be showed roads, places…

2.1: Moving a big city.

2.1: All places should be remembered.

3.0: Even trying to be accustomed to a new home is difficult for them.

3.1: They spend lots of time for getting accustomed to their school and teacher.

3.2: Accepting a new friend is difficult among children.

4.0: Finding a suitable job is easy for nobody.

4.1: Learning new tasks is hard.

4.2: Even if job is ready before a person come there is something which isn’t ready.

 

MOVING A NEW CITY OR TOWN

People generally think that the city which they live is better than the others because they know all beauties, opportunities and life styles in there. They don’t want to leave there except for going somewhere for holiday or trip since people miss places which they get accustomed to live not only born. So, four main effect of moving to a new place or town are finding new fiends, getting used to a new place, effects on children and finding o job.

First, moving a new city or town leads to find new friends. A person should be relationship with friends like the others, so they must find new friends when they move a new place. But, everyone may not like the other people. Therefore, they should find friends who think like them and they can agree with each other. However, not only finding a friend can’t be enough for make a friend because they don’t want to be friend with them.  Later, they must get used to their surroundings and their behaviors. As a result, finding new friends is essential but difficult.

Second, moving a new city or town leads to get used to new place. It means that people don’t know new roads, buildings or places, so one should show them. Otherwise, they can’t find the ways and can be lost. If they don’t want to be lost, they should remember all places which they have already seen. If they move a big city or mega- city which are more crowded and have huge populations, the possibility of losing is high and they must know places very well.

Third, moving a new city or town leads negative effect on children. Childhood is sensible term for a person so; even not changing a city, changing a home can be affect them deeply.  Children should go to a new school when they move. They spend lots of time to get used to their new schools, friends, lessons and teachers and it is especially difficult for some of them. The way of playing a game, behaviors of children and the way of choosing teammate which are important for children may change place to place. Moreover, accepting a new friend is difficult among the children, especially among girls.

Fourth, moving a new city or town leads to find a job which is essential for earning money to live. They must try lots of way to find a suitable job, for example, they may get a job isn’t suitable until find a suitable job. Learning new tasks can be hard because every job have different opportunities and duties. Even if job is ready before they come to a new place, something not prepared cause some problems.

In conclusion, people can move because of some reason such as to start a new life, to find a new job, to live in a new place. However, in life everything   has got advantage and disadvantage, so it also has got negative something.