23 Nisan 2014 Çarşamba

Cause and Effect2


 Thesis: People use mobile phone for variety of causes which are being accessible, recording, researching and having funny qualities.

1.0: It is profitable to be accessible.

1.1: It provides people calling somebody when they need.

1:2: If a person can’t call somebody, they can send massage.

2.0: People can record their memory.

2.1: When people who have got a mobile phone come across interesting something, they can take a photo.

2.2: when people need to record a long time, they can do it.

3.0: It’s useful for searching and has got funny qualities.

3.1: People can be connected with internet.

4.1: People can play game with mobile phones or download different applications.

 

                                               Causes of Using Mobile Phone

                The number of people who use mobile phone is getting higher around the world. It is nearly essential things for human life today. However, people generally don’t think why they use it. People use mobile phone for variety of causes which are being accessible, recording, researching and having funny qualities.

                The first factor is profitable to be accessible. It provides people calling people when they need. Because everyone need to information about other people, calling is important thing in our life. So, people use cell phone to be connected with their friends and families. Moreover, young people use it to be leader of their surroundings.  Sometimes, people have suitable time for calling, so they can send massage in these times. When people don’t have enough time for calling or they don’t want to speak but they need to say something, they can use it. Sending massage has different meaning among young people, which is to be popular.

                The second factor is record their important or unimportant memories. When people who have got a mobile phone come across interesting something, they can take a photo. When they want to look at them or print their photographs, they can do it very easily. If they want record only sound, they can do it and listen again and again. They can record all movements and play them if they want. Moreover, they can share their records with their friends or families. Therefore, mobile phones make our life more comfortable and easier.

                Another factor is that it’s useful for searching and funny qualities. People need to internet in every part of life, so it is important for them. Mobile phone provides people to connect it.  Whenever people want to connected with the internet, they can do it very simply. Generally, they can do it wherever they are. For example, they can search a thing which they see when they walk on the street.  Thanks to it, people can do what they do on the internet. Generally, people get bored and need to spend their time with funny something, so mobile phone help them to solve this problem. Because it has got lots of qualities and people can download some other applications which they want, it can help them.

                Shortly, using of mobile phone is caused by something which people don’t think about. It’s geeing more developed, so it’s thought that in future it would help people much more than these days. So, it’s expected that the number of people who use it would be high and they would use it much more without thinking its negative effects.

4 yorum:

  1. ** Because everyone need to information about other people, calling is important thing in our life. (Sva) (missing articles) (Pos)
    ** Sending massage has different meaning among young people, which is to be popular. (missing an article) ( which is 'to be' popular ? )

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  2. 1)Sometimes, people have suitable time for calling, so they can send massage (spelling mistake) in these times.
    2)It’s geeing (spelling mistake) more developed, so it’s thought that in future it would help people much more than these days.
    3) When people don’t have enough time for calling or they don’t want to speak (punctuation) but they need to say something, they can use it.

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  3. 1)It is nearly essential things for human life today.(You said it and essential things.I think there is a mistake with them)
    2). If they want record only sound ( missing preposition)

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  4. 1)Another factor is that *it’s useful for searching and funny qualities : You shouldn't use abbreviations in your essays.(3.body parag.)

    2) Shortly, using of mobile phone is caused by something which people don’t think about* :something is missing here. (conclusion paragraph).

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