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Let's make up a story
First of all, make your groups of 4
Then, you have to choose the main characters.
Then, it is necessary to describe their appearance, their nature and explain how they are related together. You have to give enough details without revealing everything.
Next, you should determine the places of the story.
Finally, you have to choose the time of the story.
Your story should be based on a main theme or main themes and it can be fantastic.
You can add some photos to describe your story.
 Use past simple and past continuous tense  

Argumentative Essay2 -Should Both Parents Assume Equal Responsibilities in Raising a Child?

                   Should Both Parents Assume Equal Responsibilities in Raising a Child?

                Some parents think that it can be enough for children if only mother take their responsibilities. These people think like this are generally father because they don’t want to be interested in their children’s problems. However, it is accepted that fathers and mothers responsibilities are different from each other in families, but their responsibilities are equal. So, both parents should assume equal responsibility in raising a child because children want to draw their attention, children don’t spend lots of time with them, they don’t consider only one of them and it gains some thoughts.

                Assuming equal responsibility is important for children because they want to draw both parents’ interest, not only their one parent’s interest. They generally think that their families don’t want them when they can’t draw their parents’ attentions. If they are successful, they want to take a present or be congratulated by their parents. Its cause is that they want to see that they are important for their parents. It is agreed that being seen by himself or herself is important for his or her developing.

                Parents take equal responsibility in raising a child because they do same thing in all day. Women and men generally go to the works and don’t return their home until the late hours, so both of them are fatigued. Therefore, they don’t have lots of time to learn what something is right or wrong to their children. Only being looked after by a parent may not be enough for them because children are at school or at home and their parents are at works all day. They can overcome this problem only if they separate equal time for their children.

                If only a parent take responsibilities for their child, it can’t be enough because children generally don’t consider about a parent whatever she/he says. It is most common reason is that women are more interested in their children and they assume more responsibilities than men So, children think that whatever they do their fathers don’t interested in neither their nor women’s thoughts. They can also think that they resist their mothers because of their thoughts which they are stronger than their mothers. However, they don’t face with these problems if their father also interested them.

                Parents’ equal responsibilities affect children in terms of their lives and futures because it gains them some thoughts. As the way their sharing responsibilities is one of good examples for them, they learn to share something which is important for people by this way. Everyone isn’t more important than the others since everyone do same things in their families. Because they see that their parents fulfill their tasks, they can learn how to realize their duties.

                To sum up, assuming equal responsibilities in raising a child is helpful both parents and the child although some people don’t think like this. One of the most significant problems is that it’s not accepted by families because of their thoughts. They think that only women raise their children even if they work and men generally are confident about it.  However, it should be accepted because of reasons which are written.

Argumentative Essay 1

Should School Provide Moral Education for Youth, or Should Instruction in Values Be Left to Parents?

                Learning is the most important things in our life, so it is essential for every part of our lives. Therefore, learning moral education which is one of the most important parts of education isn’t enough. However, it can be accepted that the most important term is childhood because children’s memories, style of life and thoughts determine that how they lead their lives. So, it can’t be said that instruction in values should be left to parents.

It’s accepted that education starts in family and it is started by parents. These things which are learned by children from their parents effect children’s life. Thanks to them, Children choose their truths and wrongs. However, because this term is major and children’s thoughts can be affected easily by small sentences. Their thoughts and believes which are learned can change if they aren’t learned constantly. So, they must learn something for their moral education in every part of time and learning in only home isn’t enough to have a good moral education.

Children learn and do lots of things in their childhood term but they determine their behaviors according to their morality. However, their moralities are determined by their surroundings, so where they spend their time and with whom they are spend their time are two factors of shaping their lives. They are at school in most of their time and there isn’t so much time for them expect for school.  Therefore, they can’t learn anything whether it is about moral behaviors or not if they don’t learn them at schools.

They generally connected with their surroundings and it is necessary to get morality and raise their morality. They are connected with their friends when they are at school, so their morality shape what they see their friends. If all children don’t learn same morality behavior, they can’t decide their behaviors. One way of learning same moral behaviors is education which is made at schools because most students behave considering their teachers what teach them.

They can’t behave morally if they don’t know how to behave in a moral way. They can’t learn it only at home because parents generally don’t enough time to be interested in their children’s behaviors. Parents are at school and children are school in all day, so they can’t spend so much time to teach how they behave towards their, friends and person elder than them. Moreover, parents generally think that children can learn moral behavior when they live because they generally accept that their children don’t imitate only them and other factors are important.

As long as children learn moral behavior, the possibility of being accepted by others is high. If they don’t have moral behaviors, they can understand everything but they may not how to behave. Education can’t be separated and it goes on develop every part of people’s lives. Because youth is also important, moral education which is provided by parents can’t be enough and schools should provide moral education for youth.

Cause and Effect2

 Thesis: People use mobile phone for variety of causes which are being accessible, recording, researching and having funny qualities.

1.0: It is profitable to be accessible.

1.1: It provides people calling somebody when they need.

1:2: If a person can’t call somebody, they can send massage.

2.0: People can record their memory.

2.1: When people who have got a mobile phone come across interesting something, they can take a photo.

2.2: when people need to record a long time, they can do it.

3.0: It’s useful for searching and has got funny qualities.

3.1: People can be connected with internet.

4.1: People can play game with mobile phones or download different applications.

 

                                               Causes of Using Mobile Phone

                The number of people who use mobile phone is getting higher around the world. It is nearly essential things for human life today. However, people generally don’t think why they use it. People use mobile phone for variety of causes which are being accessible, recording, researching and having funny qualities.

                The first factor is profitable to be accessible. It provides people calling people when they need. Because everyone need to information about other people, calling is important thing in our life. So, people use cell phone to be connected with their friends and families. Moreover, young people use it to be leader of their surroundings.  Sometimes, people have suitable time for calling, so they can send massage in these times. When people don’t have enough time for calling or they don’t want to speak but they need to say something, they can use it. Sending massage has different meaning among young people, which is to be popular.

                The second factor is record their important or unimportant memories. When people who have got a mobile phone come across interesting something, they can take a photo. When they want to look at them or print their photographs, they can do it very easily. If they want record only sound, they can do it and listen again and again. They can record all movements and play them if they want. Moreover, they can share their records with their friends or families. Therefore, mobile phones make our life more comfortable and easier.

                Another factor is that it’s useful for searching and funny qualities. People need to internet in every part of life, so it is important for them. Mobile phone provides people to connect it.  Whenever people want to connected with the internet, they can do it very simply. Generally, they can do it wherever they are. For example, they can search a thing which they see when they walk on the street.  Thanks to it, people can do what they do on the internet. Generally, people get bored and need to spend their time with funny something, so mobile phone help them to solve this problem. Because it has got lots of qualities and people can download some other applications which they want, it can help them.

                Shortly, using of mobile phone is caused by something which people don’t think about. It’s geeing more developed, so it’s thought that in future it would help people much more than these days. So, it’s expected that the number of people who use it would be high and they would use it much more without thinking its negative effects.

cause and effect essay 1-first draft

OUTLINE

Thesis: So, four main effect of moving to a new place or town are finding new fiends, getting used to a new place, effects on children and finding o job.

1.0: Try to find friends who think like a person who moved.

1.1: Being accepted by friends.

1.2: Getting used their surroundings.

2.0: A person who moved should be showed roads, places…

2.1: Moving a big city.

2.1: All places should be remembered.

3.0: Even trying to be accustomed to a new home is difficult for them.

3.1: They spend lots of time for getting accustomed to their school and teacher.

3.2: Accepting a new friend is difficult among children.

4.0: Finding a suitable job is easy for nobody.

4.1: Learning new tasks is hard.

4.2: Even if job is ready before a person come there is something which isn’t ready.

 

MOVING A NEW CITY OR TOWN

People generally think that the city which they live is better than the others because they know all beauties, opportunities and life styles in there. They don’t want to leave there except for going somewhere for holiday or trip since people miss places which they get accustomed to live not only born. So, four main effect of moving to a new place or town are finding new fiends, getting used to a new place, effects on children and finding o job.

First, moving a new city or town leads to find new friends. A person should be relationship with friends like the others, so they must find new friends when they move a new place. But, everyone may not like the other people. Therefore, they should find friends who think like them and they can agree with each other. However, not only finding a friend can’t be enough for make a friend because they don’t want to be friend with them.  Later, they must get used to their surroundings and their behaviors. As a result, finding new friends is essential but difficult.

Second, moving a new city or town leads to get used to new place. It means that people don’t know new roads, buildings or places, so one should show them. Otherwise, they can’t find the ways and can be lost. If they don’t want to be lost, they should remember all places which they have already seen. If they move a big city or mega- city which are more crowded and have huge populations, the possibility of losing is high and they must know places very well.

Third, moving a new city or town leads negative effect on children. Childhood is sensible term for a person so; even not changing a city, changing a home can be affect them deeply.  Children should go to a new school when they move. They spend lots of time to get used to their new schools, friends, lessons and teachers and it is especially difficult for some of them. The way of playing a game, behaviors of children and the way of choosing teammate which are important for children may change place to place. Moreover, accepting a new friend is difficult among the children, especially among girls.

Fourth, moving a new city or town leads to find a job which is essential for earning money to live. They must try lots of way to find a suitable job, for example, they may get a job isn’t suitable until find a suitable job. Learning new tasks can be hard because every job have different opportunities and duties. Even if job is ready before they come to a new place, something not prepared cause some problems.

In conclusion, people can move because of some reason such as to start a new life, to find a new job, to live in a new place. However, in life everything   has got advantage and disadvantage, so it also has got negative something.

Division Essay-First Draft

OUTLINE

Thesis: Children’s personal developing is affected by some influences: parents, television, peers and teachers.

1.0: Parents can guide their children’s life in a good way or in a bad way.

1.1: Everything is learnt by parents.

1.2: Parents are example for their children.

2.0: Children emulate what they see.

2.1: They will be interested in what they listen and watch in a day.

2.2: They want to live like them.

3.0: Children usually behave like their peers.

3.1: They think that acting like their friends is important.

3.2: They want to possess what other children have.

            4.0:  Teachers’ behaviors are model for their students.

                        3.1:  Teachers learn something them, so they are venerable for children.

                        3.2: Children achieve some features in classes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

                                        

              What Affects Children’s Personal Developing?

What people lived during their childhood is important for each people’s whole life.  Childhood is so fundamental that it determines what people do, say, like and how they feel. Because people’s personalities are determined in this term, knowing what they are affected should be known. Children’s personal developing is affected by some influences: parents, television, peers and teachers.

First influence is parents because children know them until they are born and admire. So, parents can guide their children’s life in a good way or in a bad way. Since education is started at home by parents, children learn everything how their parents want. Therefore, every children’s thought would be different each other in their future life. Because they are protected and thrived by their parents, they think that their parents are hero. So, they want to do, think, feel what their heroes do, think and feel. For example, they think that smoking can be a good thing if they smoke cigarette. If they say a bad expression, they can say the same expression.

Second influence is television because parents don’t lots of time with their children and let them watch television. So, they emulate people they watch on TV, how people response, what they say and how they behave. Programs, film, soap opera, songs or cartoons are lead to their interest and they can want to watch them in their future. If a child watch lots of films that include bad expressions, kidnappings, smugglers, this child can be think that these are not so bad things. So, they can also want to live what they see and hear.

Another influence is peers because children don’t want to be different from others. They don’t like the other children who are don’t behave and make sentences like them. Therefore, a child must be started to behave, make sentences like others and all children do when a child start to do something. Children want to possess whatever the other children have and important thing is other children have to buy them, not their wanting. Their goals can be same their peers. If a child want to buy a toy car, the possibility of the others wanting buy a toy car ids high. So, they can want to purchase a real car.

Fourth influence is teachers because teachers teach something. So, they are venerable and their behaviors are right for children. Teachers are not only model for them but also leader. Children sometimes see their teachers most often than their mothers and fathers and usually tell their secrets. Therefore, their behaviors towards them teach something about life. Moreover, children can’t achieve some features if they can’t achieve in class. These features some of which are self-confidence and explaining themselves would be important for their job or task and lack of these features can be lead some problems.

To sum up, children so delicate that they can be affected by trivial things and these things can change their lives. People’s characters are determined in childhood term and it is determined by lot of influences. Therefore, people are different each other.

Big City Life and Small Town Life_Comparison contrast_Second Draft

                                                                 

                  Big City Life and Small Town Life

 

                            OUTLINE

Thesis: It can be said these differences between big city life and small city life in terms of running into familiar people, meeting people who are different from each other, migration and food.

 

1: In small towns it is more likely to run into familiar people than in big cities.

 

    A: Small towns

 

         1: Everyone knows each other.

 

         2: They keep a good look out for everyone who lives there.

 

    B: Big cities

 

         1: Anyone doesn’t know even people who live in their apartment building.

 

         2: The other people’s problems don’t interest them.

 

2: In big cities it more likely to meet people who are different from each other.

 

   A: Small towns

 

        1: They have same culture because they believe similar thing.

 

        2: They have similar life style.

 

   B: Big cities

 

         1: They have different culture from each other.

 

         2: They have different life style.

 

3: There is a migration to big cities from small towns.

 

      A: Small towns

 

         1: Finding a job is hard.

 

         2: It’s easier to reach somewhere and there isn’t any problem about building.

 

      B: Big Cities

 

          1: Big cities have got large job pool.

 

           2: There are traffic problems and urban sprawl.

 

4: In smalls town foods are almost always better than in big cities.

 

      A: Small towns

 

       1: Smaller towns usually tend to have the same thing, but they are good food.

       2: Foods are healthy.

 

     B: Big cities

 

       1: There is a wide of variety of foods

        2: They aren’t healthy.

 

 

 

                                   Big City Life and Small Town Life

 

            It’s thought that the important thing is not where a person lives and the most essential thing to be happy is that a person lives with whom. Children’s characters are affected by their surroundings not by a city, town or village. However, it’s clear that people’s life and their characters change according to where they live. So, big city life and small town life affect people’s life and their differences make differences in people’s life. It can be said these differences between big city life and small town life in terms of running into familiar people, meeting people who are different from each other, migration and food.

 

            The first difference between small town life and big city life is that in small town it is more likely to run into familiar people than in big city. Everyone knows each other in small town. Even when a person has a car accident; the possibility of being familiar to other driver is high. But, in big cities anyone doesn’t know each other and they don’t need to it. They even don’t know the people who they live in their apartment building. In small town, people either know each other very well or they are relative, so they keep a good look out for everyone who lives there. The person who lives in the same town is right for them whatever they do.  However people don’t know lots of⁵ people and a person’s problems don’t interest the other people in big cities.

 

            The second difference between small town life and big city life is that in big cities is that it more likely to meet people who are different from each other. They have same culture because they believe similar thing. Moreover, they are relative or familiar with each other and their ancestors can be same people, so their culture is same or similar. In big cities people, on the other hand, have different culture from each other. Having different ancestor, not knowing each other and coming from different place are some of reasons why people have different culture. In small town people have similar life style because they have no so much to do. Nearly all people do the same thing during a day and it is normal for them. People, in contrast, have different life style in big cities. Every person has different job, task, culture and belief, so their life is affected by them and their life style is changing.

 

            Another difference between small town life and big city life is that in big cities is that the numbers of people who immigrate. People generally immigrate to big cities from small town. Therefore, finding a job is nearly impossible in small town and business offices which have been opened for years are closed. Nevertheless, big cities have got large job pool and lots of business offices are opened. So, in big cities finding a suitable job for everyone and develop themselves one job they want is easier than in small town. In small town, there aren’t so many vehicles and roads so; it’s easier to reach somewhere. There aren’t traffic problems and wasting of time during the headway. Problems about buildings aren’t seen, for there aren’t so many buildings. However; there are lots of people, vehicle, roads, and traffic lights so there are traffic problems. In big cities lots of buildings are raised day by day and urban sprawl occurs.

 

            The fourth difference between small town life and big city life is that in big cities is food. Although small towns usually tend to have the same thing because they grow their food in the same region; these foods are good, for they are grown in natural way. In big cities foods, on the contrary, have a wide variety because of import and drugs which help foods to grow immediately in every circumstance. Foods which are grown in small city are healthy because they are grown in places where are suitable for them and in natural way, not with drugs. Generally fast foods and foods which are made by machines aren’t eaten in there. However, in big cities foods are grown by using lots of different techniques and drugs. So, these foods are not only bad but also not healthy.

 

            Differences of places, which people, live affect people’s life styles and characters. Although some people can think that living in a big city is better than living in a small town; some people don’t want to live in big cities and prefer to live in small town. To me, the more a city is big, the more it has got problems.